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Journalistic Style vs 'Sales-y'
Which do you prefer?
I can write in a journalistic style, which is 'newsy', or a more 'sales-y' style, although I don't go for those sales letters with lots of hype that sound like a carnival worker is yelling at you. My preference, but it's up to you, is to inform and educate the consumer.
More journalistic style, presenting information and educating headline. Objective and factual example:
New Microchip Helps Helps Dog Owners Find Lost Dogs
Compare with the Sales-y but not too pushy headline:
Protect Your Dog and Find Your Lost Dog More Easily With Our New Microchip Implant!
Links to articles in
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Why it makes good 'horse sense' to hire me:
- I'm reliable and courteous (some might say fun) to work with
- I will always meet or beat your deadline
- I'm a fast writer. I'll work with you on a rush project